Top Three Short Scenes
Good morning, Effers – please forgive my inability to get the technology figured out to do this properly and on time! And thank you to the Effers who so kindly gave me tips and pointers. For this time, though I do not prefer it, I will be linking to the winning scenes (thank you, Brian, good solution for now).
So, at long last, we have:
A VERY TMZ CHRISTMAS by Patrick Bonner
Okay, so we’re going to vote over on the right-hand side bar, using this little survey widget Mama’s managed to figure out (does anybody have some brain space to rent for cheap?); the winner gets a $15 Amazon gift card and a free MP3 of one of my teleclasses from the Just Effing Do It series.
When you vote, look for the Entertainment Factor, look for originality, look for cleverness and look for the use of the three keywords: aztec, eggnog and felicity.
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2012 and the Aztec Calendar??? Ha ha ha…
What’s that, like a Jewish Christmas?
Great job, Patrick! Keep going after your passion!
Man… all three did an awesome job!
Way to go Patrick Bonner!
NICK expanded to a page and a quarter when written in standard 12 point Courier; TMZ did not contain the word ‘felicity;’ MEGA misspells ‘reins’ twice and drops Blitzen from Santa’s team of reindeer without explanation. Hmmmmmmm…..
Nick was, by far, the best out of the top three. So it went a little long when in “12 point Courier”. It still met all the other criteria. It is a creative, fun, scene that felt like it took a good amount of time and effort to create. The other two scenes were “OK” but Nick was really great.
Patrick Bonner is an Aztec warrior.
Martin B, not sure if reading is important when judging these sorts of things, I mean I always thought it was; but clearly it’s not for you because TMZ has “felicities” is in the first paragraph.
TMZ was awesome!!
NICK had all the elements down correctly. It gave a great insight to man who is over 2,000 years old having a mid-life crisis. Denial, abandonment issues and taking his frustrations out on someone who has supported his efforts for centuries makes this piece work. In any script if you can get down character set-up, environment and motivation in one single opening page…you’ve nailed it. This is what editors and producers want.
Julie
Not bad.
Not my style.
But an enjoyable read, all three.
All three terrible. Stupid american, you fail at everything ha ha!
Dear Wong,
I would not call any of these writers stupid, seeing as you cannot even use correct grammar.
Go Pat!
I thought all three were great, any writer knows how much time and effort it takes to pull this off. Each writer had a “voice”, that’s what pulled me into the scenes.
Kudos to those who entered, I spent at least three hours on mine, and I’m sure I’m not alone. It was a good exercise and a nice chance to read other writer’s works. Congrats to everyone.